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Here are the character sketches of some of the major leads , other characters will me introduced gradually...
Captain Aadhya Rathore — "The Lioness in Olive Green"
Jaipur ki ek seedhi-saadhi middle-class ladki, par sapne Himalayas jitne unche. Eklauti beti, maa-baap ki jaan, aur apne Nana ji ki war stories se pali-badhi. Uske andar ek ajeeb si shanti bhi thi aur ek jungli sa junoon bhi—ek aisi mix jo sirf soldiers ke dil me hoti hai. Logo ne use samjhaya ki uniform ladkiyon ke liye nahi hoti... par Aadhya ne hamesha khud ko vardi me hi dekha tha. Determined, sensitive, emotional, aur phir bhi steel ki tarah sakht—Aadhya woh ladki thi jo tootne se pehle do baar khud ko khadi karti thi. Aur wahi banata hai usse... ek soldier ka perfect raw material.
Rank: Initially Cadet and Captain and Decorated Officer
Background: Jaipur, middle-class, only child
Appearance:
Sharp jawline, wheatish complexion, expressive fierce eyes
Athletic build but graceful presence
Wears her confidence like a second skin
Personality:
Determined, disciplined, emotional but strong
A classic overthinker, yet unbreakable when duty calls
Empathetic—connects deeply with people
Fiercely independent, hates injustice
Strengths:
Topper in map reading, firing, navigation
Great at handling pressure
Natural leader, inspires loyalty
High emotional intelligence
Flaws:
Overthinks relationships
Fear of abandonment
Sometimes pushes herself too hard
Hides her pain to appear strong
Motivation:
Serve the nation
Make her late grandparents proud
Prove that women belong in olive green
Conflict:
Gender bias, heartbreak, loneliness
Toxic marriage, family pressure
The battle between duty and personal life
Character Arc:
A scared but determined girl and a fighter and a heartbroken soldier and a legendary officer and a woman who chooses love & peace after surviving war.
A scared but determined girl and a fighter and a heartbroken soldier and a legendary officer and a woman who chooses love & peace after surviving war.

Major Virat Shekhawat
Ek aisa officer jisko dekhkar lagta hai ki uniform ne usse nahi, balki usne uniform ko izzat di hai. Kam bolne wala, par har lafz ek command jaisa teekha. Uski aankhon mein discipline ka dard bhi hai aur duty ka farz bhi. Battlefield ho ya zindagi, har jagah woh khud se zyada apne logon ko bachane ke liye tayyar rehta hai. Virat ki calm personality ke peeche ek gehri kahani chhupi hai—kisi ko paas aane se pehle hazaar baar sochne wala, par ek baar trust kar le toh duniya ke khilaaf khud khada ho jaane wala. Woh soldier bhi hai... aur ek adhoora insaan bhi, jo apni khamoshi ke parde ke peeche bahut kuch chhupa kar rakhta hai."
First love, senior, Para SF officer
Background: Army brat, Rajasthan
Appearance:
Tall, sharp features, olive skin
Intense eyes, silent strong aura
Personality:
Calm, reserved, emotionally guarded
Disciplined to the core
Protective but closed off
Strengths:
Strategist, excellent in covert ops
Mentally tough
Doesn't give up easily
Weaknesses:
Fear of losing people he loves
Struggles to communicate emotions
Workaholic
Relationship with Aadhya:
Starts as strict senior
Character Arc:
Learns that love needs presence, not just protection.

Aadhya's Mother – Meera Rathore
Inspiration, emotional anchor
Background: School teacher
Personality:
Caring, soft-spoken
Aadhya's moral support
Believes in her daughter's dreams
Aadhya's Father – Mohan Rathore
Strength, emotional pillar
Background: School teacher
Personality:
Supportive, proud father
Never limits his daughter
Believes "beti ya beta, soldier soldier hota hai"
Chacha & Chachi( Sohan & Reema Rathore)
relatives
Background: Traditional, controlling
Personality:
Manipulative
Narrow-minded
Uses Aadhya for social gain
Para SF Team (Brotherhood Team)
Key Members:
1. Zaid Khan – Funny, loyal, gives emotional support
2. Kabir Rawat – Tough, respects Aadhya, becomes her brother-like figure
3. Gurpreet "Garry" Singh – Lightens tension, comic relief
Her battlefield family, the ones who finally see her worth.

Commanding Officer – Colonel Arvind Singh
Mentor
Personality:
Strict but fair
First high-ranking officer to truly trust Aadhya
Encourages her during training, and later missions.
Treats adhya like a daughter.
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(INTRODUCTION)
Ae watan, watan mere, aabaad rahe tu;
Main jahan rahun, jahaan me yaad rahe tu...
"Log kehte hain fauj dil ko sakht bana deti hai... par mujhe lagta hai ki sachcha dil woh hai jo uniform pehenkar bhi dhadakta rahe. Mere liye desh hamesha pehla hai. Pyaar agar kabhi meri zindagi mein aayega, toh usse mere jazbe ki aag samajhni hogi—mujhe rokne ka nahi, mere saath khade rehne ka hausla chahiye hoga. Main kamzor nahi hoon, bas meri ragon mein discipline behata hai aur dil mein ek khamoshi se chalne wala jung. Mujhe pyaar toh chahiye... par aisa jo mere kandhon par lage stars ka bojh samajh sake, aur meri kadam-tal mein bhi desh ki dhadkan mehsoos kar sake."
~ Adhya Rathore🎇
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"Army ne mujhe ek cheez sikhayi hai—jazbaat baad mein, duty pehle. Log kehte hain main ziddi hoon, par sach yeh hai ki battlefield ne mujhe sikhaya hai ki emotions weakness ban sakte hain. Isiliye main apne aas-paas deewaaren rakhta hoon... taaki koi phir se toot kar na chale jaaye. Lekin phir Aadhya mili—ek aisi officer jiske andar woh aag hai jo maine sirf legends mein dekhi thi. Usse dekhkar pehli baar laga... shayad uniform ke peeche bhi ek dil dhadak sakta hai, par us dhadkan ko protect karna bhi meri duty jaisa hi sacred hai."
~ Major Virat Shekhawat✨
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Let's see how would be the journey of Adhya into this new world.....where respect demands discipline and hardwork...
And one more thing.... all of my characters too have flaws, they will make mistakes.... because none is perfect, everyone has some flaws...
Please do vote and add this to your reading list if you find this interesting...
~Asi

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